Well,
THAT'S a subject heading one doesn't see everyday!
Ok, so when I'm
REALLY stressed out to the max, I generally have only two options that work:
1) I go jogging. Which, for reasons that are irrelevant here, I began doing again for the first time in six years, this past weekend. I'm running 3 miles every other day. I was doing it every day until a persistent cramp in one calf made clear I was overdoing it after the long hiatus.
2) I write something
REALLY structured - like a
Petrarchan Sonnet. Two weeks ago a friend was stressing out and, given my ridiculous tendency toward empathy, my friend's emotional state impacted with mine.
The point of all this is that I ended up writing a new piece which several people are pushing me to publish, so I'm tossing it in the proverbial bottle and letting it float on the waves of the internet.
The octet's a bit of a combination of the kind of disconnected visual imagery, written in a stream of consciousness style, one might find in an
Alan Ginsburg poem, like those found in
The Fall of America (I was fortunate to attend a reading by Alan, speak with him, and get him to autograph a copy of that very volume a few years prior to his death). While
the turn and the sestet adhere to more traditional Petrarchan elements and rules.
For those who might wonder, the octet imagery is drawn from actual events in the State of Florida, related to one another, over a short time period.
Hopefully, I'll get some feedback on this piece and perhaps the photos as well (if you click on any of the images, you will get a much larger version).
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Cantus CatalinaLithe spirited
Muse proves moonlight so pale,
Viridian eyes shame gold lighthouse beams,
Feline its essence, with
Lorelei themes,
Beckons the
Venti to billow white sail.
Gold morning sunshine adorns porpoise tails,
Open top driving in Florida’s gleams,
Sapphire twilight revives polka-dot dreams,
Night’s clingy black dress calls soddening gales.
One word from her lips brings life to dry earth,
Giggles unbidden melt ice from cold stone,
Odysseus’ Siren kindles new art.
Brief moments shared are a priceless rebirth,
de Leon’s fount midst fair
Venus’ mons,
Love unexpected has
purloined this heart.
© Copyright, Keith Krebs, 2008, All Rights Reserved
Polka Dot Dreams in Sapphire
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